Week12: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH regret

Experiment 2.1:

Ezaru Encountering a set trap

Setting of a deep forest, panning to, showing the covered trap from above, a mouse is tied up to a prong, 

from the bushes emerges ominous eyes, growling, in a split second (cam cut)
The dragon pounces on the mouse, and the trap is set (cutting as it closes)
Moma dragon finds the baby ezaru, who is yowling, she breaks the trap scolding baby Ezaru.

Experiment 2.2

Ezaru returning to the nest after leaving Ace, 

and she keeps seeing him in the room (though the environment)

Light pouring through the entrance of the nest A shadow show up through the door, looking ominous, for Ezaru to tenderly walk in (looking down on her)
She jumps onto her ledge and looks towards the door expectantly, (like a doggo)

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I keep looking at the plot, I have no idea how im supposed to do this, so far the only one i'm happy with is 1.1.5
I ended up doing two characters for the first, 

I'm finding it hard to create an introduction for them, Trying for one Could work, 2.1 was more introducing baby ezaru and her mother, more setting up for her Mother,

I think I need to introduced one then one, as in RWBY they introduced one main character at a time giving time for us to see how the character interacts and works, I still believe my 1.1.5 Best reflects this
I currently have 3 animatic, intros and 5 written intros,

 (written out some don’t make sense)

Experiment 1.1.3:

Establishing shot of Ezaru flying down and landing, she stalks up on Ace appearing to be hunting only, she get ready to pounce

Cut away to

All roughed up.
Ace on the ground face in hands
“You bloody moron Ezaru,”
“How was I supposed to know the cliff would collapse”
Ace is not Impressed.